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olga
11 November 2007 @ 04:50 pm
This Ought To Be Different - 21/21  

 

  
 
 
 
 
 
 

Chapter Twenty One: ”If Adama only knew what made Eleven go for that bargain. If he only knew what made the cylon so livid.”

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olga
02 November 2007 @ 03:19 pm
This Ought To Be Different - 20/21  
Chapter Twenty: Kara and Sam both gaped at him dumbfounded, Baltar had his usual wierdo appearance, but Apollo was certain that Six understood.

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olga
31 October 2007 @ 09:16 am
This Ought To Be Different  
I had this idea yesterday, during the final read before posting. Surprised I hadn’t thought of it sooner, it’s so obvious. Now I should delete some parts of previous chapters, but hey, it’s too late for that. Some people work well with “writing as they go”; I do not. Too many threads, too many twists. At least it’s on a final straight now – I only have to rewrite the next chapter, but at least the ending should write itself pretty smoothly. Wow. . . Brace yourselves. :) 

Chatper Nineteen:  “There’s a ghost up there,” Sam squeaked.



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olga
30 October 2007 @ 08:13 am
This Ought To Be Different - 18/21  

Thanks for your comments, they realy encourage me to continue posting, because they make me think that perhaps you're right and this is fun? Really, thanks.

Chapter Eighteen: Here she was, standing beside the pillar. She had a view of the other four pilars, and Six was standing beside another one. The other three were empty.


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olga
29 October 2007 @ 11:28 am
This Ought To Be Different - 17/21  
Chapter Seventeen: "...the picture of mandala, colored in green, pink and orange, slowly faded from the slanted surface. Six stared at it, trying to comprehend it's meaning."


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olga
24 October 2007 @ 09:49 am
This Ought To Be Different 16/21  
I know one thing, I'm not going to try writing a story without a plan EVAH again. This is going to be a mess from now on. Hope you suspend your disbelief enough to forgive me.
Loves and Thanks. 

Chapter Sixteen: “Don’t touch it!” Four warned, but Baltar didn’t hear him. 




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olga
21 October 2007 @ 06:24 pm
This Ought To Be Different 15/21  
 Whoa! The WALL finally gave in, and I managed to break through way into the chapter nineteen. Huzzah. In the meantime I also managed to sorta eradicate a character-rape I committed in chap 16. Some traces remained, but please don’t pay attention. 
So. I guess I will now invite you to enjoy chapter fifteen. And tell me what you think.

Chapter Fifteen: “We lost the signal, sir!” Gaeta reported as the Galactica concluded the jump.

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olga
19 October 2007 @ 09:03 am
This Ought To Be Different - Chapter Fourteen  

Chapter Fourteen:  "God gave us a second chance.” Six looked intensely at Starbuck, and Starbuck relized

 
 
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olga
17 October 2007 @ 08:33 am
This Ought To Be Different - Chapter Thirteen  
 
Chapter Six: “She took a step toward him. Another step. The sound of her high heels hitting the stony floor reverberated in the spacious hall. Another step. She crouched beside him and cocked her head to the side. A devious smile spread on her lips.”


Chapter Eight: “You’re not going to believe it!” Dee and Sam looked up to see Kara, smiling triumphantly, and Six right behind her, rather amused. “You’re not going to believe what we’ve found!”


Chapter Nine: “I thought I’d grieve, and keep going, because that’s my duty. Because I’m an Admiral. But no. My Lee is gone. And with him my purpose. All my purpose. All my life.”

Chapter Ten: "The area was elliptic. Or ellipsoidal even; the floor and ceiling weren’t flat either. There was no corner in the room, even the flickering screens, filling the wall opposite from the entrance; few buttons on the flat, slanted surface below the monitors; the surface itself, were round, oval, elliptic.

Chapter Eleven: "Six stopped dead in her tracks, watching the mandala oposite from the room entrance. Its sun rays were slowly revolving.

Chapter Twelve: "...they managed to find Baltar’s DNA, clone him and grow his clone in the Resurrection Ship. His body was almost ready for a download. They were considerring killing and downloading Caprica as well..." 

Chapter Thirteen: "And then they heard a laughter. The Hybrid was laughing."  

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olga
12 October 2007 @ 02:39 pm
This Ought To Be Different - Chapter Twelve  

Chapter Six: “She took a step toward him. Another step. The sound of her high heels hitting the stony floor reverberated in the spacious hall. Another step. She crouched beside him and cocked her head to the side. A devious smile spread on her lips.”


Chapter Eight: “You’re not going to believe it!” Dee and Sam looked up to see Kara, smiling triumphantly, and Six right behind her, rather amused. “You’re not going to believe what we’ve found!”


Chapter Nine: “I thought I’d grieve, and keep going, because that’s my duty. Because I’m an Admiral. But no. My Lee is gone. And with him my purpose. All my purpose. All my life.”

Chapter Ten: "The area was elliptic. Or ellipsoidal even; the floor and ceiling weren’t flat either. There was no corner in the room, even the flickering screens, filling the wall opposite from the entrance; few buttons on the flat, slanted surface below the monitors; the surface itself, were round, oval, elliptic.

Chapter Eleven: "Six stopped dead in her tracks, watching the mandala oposite from the room entrance. Its sun rays were slowly revolving.

Chapter Twelve: "...they managed to find Baltar’s DNA, clone him and grow his clone in the Resurrection Ship. His body was almost ready for a download. They were considerring killing and downloading Caprica as well..." 

 

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olga
09 October 2007 @ 01:29 pm
This Ought To Be Different - Chapter Eleven  
Frak! I don't care, I need feedback when I'm writing fanfiction. And I figured that if I write one chapter in two days, and post two chapters a week, I should still make it.

This is the chapter that was posted on the Adama Realm a few months ago, so nothing new for the Realmers. Will be in a few days though.


Chapter Six: “She took a step toward him. Another step. The sound of her high heels hitting the stony floor reverberated in the spacious hall. Another step. She crouched beside him and cocked her head to the side. A devious smile spread on her lips.”


Chapter Eight: “You’re not going to believe it!” Dee and Sam looked up to see Kara, smiling triumphantly, and Six right behind her, rather amused. “You’re not going to believe what we’ve found!”


Chapter Nine: “I thought I’d grieve, and keep going, because that’s my duty. Because I’m an Admiral. But no. My Lee is gone. And with him my purpose. All my purpose. All my life.”

Chapter Ten: "The area was elliptic. Or ellipsoidal even; the floor and ceiling weren’t flat either. There was no corner in the room, even the flickering screens, filling the wall opposite from the entrance; few buttons on the flat, slanted surface below the monitors; the surface itself, were round, oval, elliptic." 

Chapter Eleven: "Six stopped dead in her tracks, watching the mandala oposite from the room entrance. Its sun rays were slowly revolving.


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olga
16 May 2007 @ 12:32 pm
This Ought To Be Different (10/?)  
 
Chapter Six: “She took a step toward him. Another step. The sound of her high heels hitting the stony floor reverberated in the spacious hall. Another step. She crouched beside him and cocked her head to the side. A devious smile spread on her lips.”


Chapter Eight: “You’re not going to believe it!” Dee and Sam looked up to see Kara, smiling triumphantly, and Six right behind her, rather amused. “You’re not going to believe what we’ve found!”


Chapter Nine: “I thought I’d grieve, and keep going, because that’s my duty. Because I’m an Admiral. But no. My Lee is gone. And with him my purpose. All my purpose. All my life.”

Chapter Ten: "The area was elliptic. Or ellipsoidal even; the floor and ceiling weren’t flat either. There was no corner in the room, even the flickering screens, filling the wall opposite from the entrance; few buttons on the flat, slanted surface below the monitors; the surface itself, were round, oval, elliptic." 


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olga
04 May 2007 @ 08:41 pm
This Ought To Be Different (9/?)  

Chapter Six: “She took a step toward him. Another step. The sound of her high heels hitting the stony floor reverberated in the spacious hall. Another step. She crouched beside him and cocked her head to the side. A devious smile spread on her lips.”


Chapter Eight: “You’re not going to believe it!” Dee and Sam looked up to see Kara, smiling triumphantly, and Six right behind her, rather amused. “You’re not going to believe what we’ve found!”


Chapter Nine: “I thought I’d grieve, and keep going, because that’s my duty. Because I’m an Admiral. But no. My Lee is gone. And with him my purpose. All my purpose. All my life.”

 

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olga
23 March 2007 @ 11:47 am
This Ought To Be Different 8/?  
Summary: “Rapture” AU. As the sun is going Nova, and the Algae planet is about to explode, Kara, Lee, Sam and Dee follow a cylon model Six into the Temple. Six says it would give them shelter . . .



 
 
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olga
24 February 2007 @ 05:15 pm
This Ought To Be Different 7/?  
Summary: “Rapture” AU. As the sun is going Nova, and the Algae planet is about to explode, Kara, Lee, Sam and Dee follow a cylon model Six into the Temple. Six says it would give them shelter . . .



 
 
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olga
18 February 2007 @ 11:25 pm
 

Summary: “Rapture” AU. As the sun is going Nova, and the Algae planet is about to explode, Kara, Lee, Sam and Dee follow a cylon model Six into the Temple. Six says it would give them shelter . . .



Chapter One: “The brunette’s name was Dee, the moaning, bloodied man’s name was Sam, her name was Starbuck. She didn’t know the names of the blue-eyed man and the blonde. And they were in a raptor that might go ‘boom’ anytime.”

Chapter Two: “Starbuck looked at the two men, suddenly frightened. Your husbands, Shelly said, one of them was her husband. And she wondered which.”

Chapter Three: “At the top of the column Kara noticed bright blue crystals – they resembled the five pentagonal pillars below. A ray of vibrant blue light shone straight up from each of those crystals toward the same five crystals in the seal of the dome.”

Chapter Four: “The Temple was built as a shelter for the five priests. So when I realized that we’d crashed practically at it’s feet, that we were in need of a shelter, and that there were five of us--”
 

Chapter Five: “This was a long day for everyone, but for this Six it was a day that changed everything. Earlier this morning she’d been nothing more than a vision in Gaius Baltar’s mind. Now she had a body that obeyed her will and her will only.”


Chapter Six: “She took a step toward him. Another step. The sound of her high heels hitting the stony floor reverberated in the spacious hall. Another step. She crouched beside him and cocked her head to the side. A devious smile spread on her lips.”

 
 
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olga
02 February 2007 @ 05:12 pm
This Ought To Be Different - 5/?  
Title: This Ought To Be Different 4/?
Rating: T
Genre: Action, Suspense;
Spoilers: Eye of Jupiter; Season-3.5 AU
Character/s: The FIVE = Quadrangle of Doom + Six
Word count: ~1500 (chapter)
Disclaimers: the characters and the universe of “Battlestar Galactica” do not belong to me;
A/N: “Rapture” AU. 

 

 
 
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olga
24 January 2007 @ 04:40 pm
This Ought To Be Different 4/?  
Title: This Ought To Be Different 4/?
Rating: T
Genre: Action, Suspense;
Spoilers: Eye of Jupiter; Season-3.5 AU
Character/s: The FIVE = Quadrangle of Doom + Six
Word count: ~1500 (chapter)
Disclaimers: the characters and the universe of “Battlestar Galactica” do not belong to me;
A/N: “Rapture” AU. Very loosely based on promos.
 
 
 
olga
21 January 2007 @ 09:02 pm
This Ought To Be Different 3/?  
Title: This Ought To Be Different 3/?
Rating: T
Genre: Action, Suspense;
Spoilers: Eye of Jupiter; Season-3.5 AU
Character/s: The FIVE = Quadrangle of Doom + Six
Word count: ~1500 (chapter)
Disclaimers: the characters and the universe of “Battlestar Galactica” do not belong to me;
A/N: Consider it “Rapture” AU. Loosely based on promos.


 
 
olga
21 January 2007 @ 08:59 pm
This Ought To Be Different - 2/?  
Title: This Ought To Be Different 2/?
Rating: T
Genre: Action, Suspense;
Spoilers: Eye of Jupiter; Season-3.5 AU
Character/s: The FIVE = Quadrangle of Doom + Six
Word count: ~1500 (chapter)
Disclaimers: the characters and the universe of “Battlestar Galactica” do not belong to me;
A/N: Consider it “Rapture” AU. Loosely based on promos.